YOU SAID:
I want to do my job so efficiently that when I leave, everybody, patrons and coworkers, feel a real unshakable sense of dread.
INTO JAPANESE
私は自分の仕事をとても効率的に行いたいと思っています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I want to do my work very efficiently.
INTO JAPANESE
私は自分の仕事をとても効率的にやりたい。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I want to do my work very efficiently.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.