YOU SAID:
I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts, there they are, standing in a row.
INTO JAPANESE
私はココナッツの素敵な束を持っている、彼らはそこに並んで立っている。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I have a nice bunch of coconuts, they are standing side by side.
INTO JAPANESE
私はココナッツの素敵な束を持って、彼らは並んで立っている。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I have a nice bunch of coconuts, they are standing side by side.
Come on, you can do better than that.