YOU SAID:
...I think she's working here part-time,
INTO JAPANESE
...彼女はパートタイムでここで働いていると思います、
BACK INTO ENGLISH
...I think she works part-time here,
INTO JAPANESE
...彼女はここでパートタイムで働いていると思います、
BACK INTO ENGLISH
...I think she works part-time here,
Come on, you can do better than that.