YOU SAID:
I talked to my mom for a few minutes then zipped to the store
INTO JAPANESE
私は数分間私の母と話をした後、店にファスナーで締めました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I talked to my mother for a few minutes and then ziped to the store
INTO JAPANESE
私は数分間母と話をした後、店に急ぎました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I talked to my mother for a few minutes and then rushed to the store
INTO JAPANESE
私は数分間母と話をし、そして店に急いだ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I talked to my mother for a few minutes and rushed to the store
INTO JAPANESE
私は数分間母と話をして店に急いだ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I talked to my mother for a few minutes and rushed to the store
Come on, you can do better than that.