YOU SAID:
I saw them standing right there, kinda thought they might care (might care, might care)
INTO JAPANESE
私は彼らがそこに立っているのを見て、彼らが気にするかもしれないと思った
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I saw them standing there and thought they might care
INTO JAPANESE
彼らがそこに立っているのを見ました
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Saw them standing there
INTO JAPANESE
そこに立って見た
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I stood there and watched
INTO JAPANESE
私はそこに立って見ました
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I stood there and watched
Come on, you can do better than that.