YOU SAID:
I'm taking this horse by the reins making redcoats redder with bloodstains!
INTO JAPANESE
私はこの馬を血の染みで赤みを帯びた手綱で取っています!
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I am taking this horse with a red stain with blood stain!
INTO JAPANESE
私はこの馬を血の染みで赤い染みで取っています!
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I am taking this horse with a red stain with blood stain!
Come on, you can do better than that.