YOU SAID:
I love when he wraps his strong hands round my delicate neck and chokes me into heavenly submission.
INTO JAPANESE
私は彼の強い手を繊細な首に巻きつけて、私を天の服従に泣かせます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I wrap his strong hand around delicate neck and make me cry in heavenly submission.
INTO JAPANESE
私は繊細な首の周りに彼の強い手を包み、天の服従で私を泣かせます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I wrap his strong hand around delicate neck and make me cry in heavenly submission.
Come on, you can do better than that.