YOU SAID:
I knocked on the door in the middle of the night and cried, begging me not to go home.
INTO JAPANESE
私は真夜中にドアをノックし、家に帰らないでと泣きながら懇願しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I knocked on his door in the middle of the night, crying and begging him not to come home.
INTO JAPANESE
私は真夜中に彼の家のドアをノックし、泣きながら家に帰らないでと懇願した。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I knocked on his door in the middle of the night, crying and begging him not to come home.
Come on, you can do better than that.