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i hopped into a coffee shop and then my jaw dropped in shock when i saw a girl wearing cool pants i started to advance

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喫茶店に飛び込んで、クールなパンツを履いた女の子を見てショックで顎が落ちた私は前進し始めた

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I popped into a coffee shop and saw a girl in cool pants My jaw dropped in shock I started moving forward

INTO JAPANESE

喫茶店に立ち寄ると、かっこいいパンツを履いた女の子が見えたショックで顎が落ちて前に進み始めた

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When I stopped by a coffee shop, I saw a girl wearing cool pants.The shock made me drop my jaw and start moving forward.

INTO JAPANESE

喫茶店に立ち寄った時、かっこいいパンツを履いた女の子を見かけた。衝撃で顎を落とし、前に進み出た。

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When I stopped by a coffee shop, I saw a girl wearing cool pants. I dropped my chin on impact and stepped forward.

INTO JAPANESE

喫茶店に立ち寄った時、かっこいいパンツを履いた女の子を見かけました。私は衝撃で顎を落とし、前に踏み出しました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I stopped by a coffee shop, I saw a girl wearing cool pants. I dropped my jaw on impact and stepped forward.

INTO JAPANESE

喫茶店に立ち寄った時、かっこいいパンツを履いた女の子を見かけました。私は衝撃で顎を落とし、前に出ました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I stopped by a coffee shop, I saw a girl wearing cool pants. I dropped my jaw on impact and stepped forward.