YOU SAID:
i heard she sang a good song, i heard she had a style, and so i came to see her to listen for a while.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女がいい歌を歌っていると聞いて、スタイルがあると聞いたので、しばらく彼女に会いに来ました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I heard she was singing a good song and I heard she had a style, so I came to see her for a while.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女はいい歌を歌っていると聞いて、スタイルがあると聞いたので、しばらく彼女に会いに来ました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I heard she was singing a good song and I heard she had a style, so I came to see her for a while.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.