YOU SAID:
I find this class so interesting, and for the first time ever, I want to do well in the class for my own benefit. I want to further my career and show that I have a deep and solid understanding of something I'm so passionate about.
INTO JAPANESE
この授業はとても興味深いので、初めて自分の利益のためにこの授業で良い成績を取りたいと思っています。キャリアをさらに伸ばし、自分が情熱を注いでいるものについて深くしっかりと理解していることを示したいです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This class is very interesting and for the first time I want to do well in this class for my own benefit - to further my career and show that I have a deep and solid understanding of something I'm passionate about.
INTO JAPANESE
この授業はとても興味深いので、初めて、自分の利益のために、つまり自分のキャリアをさらに進め、自分が情熱を注いでいる何かについて深くしっかりと理解していることを示すために、この授業で良い成績を取りたいと思っています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This class is very interesting and, for the first time, I want to do well in it for my own benefit - to further my career and to show that I have a deep and solid understanding of something I'm passionate about.
INTO JAPANESE
この授業はとても興味深いので、初めて、自分の利益のために、つまり自分のキャリアをさらに前進させ、自分が情熱を注いでいる何かについて深くしっかりと理解していることを示すために、この授業で良い成績を取りたいと思っています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This class is very interesting and, for the first time, I want to do well in it for my own benefit - to further my career and to show that I have a deep and solid understanding of something I'm passionate about.
Come on, you can do better than that.