YOU SAID:
I could hear the hiker's footfalls creaking up the wooden stairs, step after step, flight after flight.
INTO JAPANESE
ハイカーの足音が木製の階段をきしむ音が聞こえました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I heard the hiker's footsteps squeaking the wooden stairs.
INTO JAPANESE
ハイカーの足音が木の階段をきしむのを聞いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I heard the hiker's footsteps squeak the wooden stairs.
INTO JAPANESE
ハイカーの足音が木の階段をきしむのを聞いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I heard the hiker's footsteps squeak the wooden stairs.
Come on, you can do better than that.