YOU SAID:
I could also sense that he was afraid of me and that he thought I was a monster.
INTO JAPANESE
私はまた、彼が私を恐れていること、そして彼が私が怪物だと思ったことを感じることができました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I could also feel that he was afraid of me and that he thought I was a monster.
INTO JAPANESE
私はまた、彼が私を恐れていると彼は私が怪物だと思ったことを感じることができました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I could also feel that he was afraid of me and that he thought I was a monster.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.