YOU SAID:
I clutched my leg and hopped about in pain, holding back tears.
INTO JAPANESE
私は足を握りしめ、涙をこらえながら痛みで飛び跳ねました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I clenched my leg and jumped in pain, holding back my tears.
INTO JAPANESE
涙をこらえながら、足を食いしばって痛みに飛び込んだ。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
While holding back my tears, I clenched my leg and jumped into pain.
INTO JAPANESE
涙をこらえながら、足を食いしばって痛みに飛び込んだ。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
While holding back my tears, I clenched my leg and jumped into pain.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.