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How she seemed to feel herself superior to the universe even as she submitted to it, making the submission somehow a kind of martyrdom
INTO JAPANESE
彼女が宇宙に提出したときでさえ、彼女が宇宙よりも優れていると感じたように見えたので、提出はどういうわけか一種の殉教になりました
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The submission was somehow a kind of martyrdom, as she seemed to feel better than the universe, even when she submitted it to space.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女が宇宙に提出したときでさえ、彼女は宇宙よりも気分が良いように見えたので、提出はどういうわけか一種の殉教でした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The submission was somehow a kind of martyrdom, as she seemed to feel better than the universe, even when she submitted it to space.
Come on, you can do better than that.