YOU SAID:
Hi there! Will you be my friend?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは!私と友達になって頂けませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello! Would you like to make friends with me?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは!私と友達になりたいですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello! Do you want to be friends with me?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは!あなたは私と友達になりたいですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello! Do you want to be friends with me?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.