YOU SAID:
Hi my name is rachel and i wanted to say hello.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは私の名前はrachelであり、私はこんにちはと言いたかったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello my name is rachel, but I wanted to say hello.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは私の名前はrachelですが、こんにちはと言いたいと思いました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello my name is rachel, but I wanted to say hello.
Come on, you can do better than that.