YOU SAID:
hi daddy what are you doing tonight can johnny come over please
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちはパパ、今夜は何をしているの？
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi daddy, what are you doing tonight?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、パパ、今夜は何をしていますか？
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, Daddy, What are you doing tonight?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、パパ、今夜は何をしていますか？
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, Daddy, What are you doing tonight?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.
