YOU SAID:

Hi are you asleep young one

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こんにちは、眠っていますか、若者

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Hello, are you asleep, young man?

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こんにちは、若者、眠っていますか？

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Hello young man, are you asleep?

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こんにちは、若者、眠っていますか？

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Hello young man, are you asleep?