YOU SAID:
Hi are you asleep young one
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、眠っていますか、若者
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, are you asleep, young man?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、若者、眠っていますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello young man, are you asleep?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、若者、眠っていますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello young man, are you asleep?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.