YOU SAID:
hey do you want to come and have some drinks at my place some time?
INTO JAPANESE
ねえ、いつか私の家に飲みに来ませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hey, would you like to come over to my house for a drink sometime?
INTO JAPANESE
ねえ、いつか私の家に飲みに来ない?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hey, would you like to come over to my house for a drink sometime?
Come on, you can do better than that.