YOU SAID:

Her black hair was twisted up in a haphazard knot and the dark circles under her eyes were more pronounced tonight.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女の黒髪は無造作に結び付けられており、目の下のくまは今夜はいつもより目立っていた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Her dark hair was pulled back carelessly and the bags under her eyes were more noticeable than usual tonight.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女の黒い髪は無造作に後ろにまとめられており、目の下のくまは今夜はいつもより目立っていた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Her dark hair was pulled back carelessly and the bags under her eyes were more noticeable than usual tonight.