YOU SAID:
Hello would you like to go to the party with me
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私と一緒にパーティーに行きませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, would you like to go to a party with me?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私と一緒にパーティーに行きませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, would you like to go to a party with me?
Come on, you can do better than that.