YOU SAID:
Hello! Today I went to the store and I bought a block of cheese and then I took my dog on a walk to the park.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは!今日、お店に行ってチーズのブロックを買って、犬を連れて公園まで散歩しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello! Today I went to the store, bought a block of cheese, and took my dog for a walk to the park.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは!今日私は店に行き、チーズのブロックを購入し、犬を公園まで散歩に連れて行きました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello! Today I went to the store, bought a block of cheese, and took the dog for a walk to the park.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは!今日私は店に行き、チーズのブロックを買って、犬を公園まで散歩に連れて行きました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello! Today I went to the store, bought a block of cheese, and took the dog for a walk to the park.
Come on, you can do better than that.