YOU SAID:

Hello there, I was just asking if I could come over for dinner round yours tomorrow if that’s ok.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは。もしよろしければ、明日あなたの家の近くで夕食を食べに来てもいいですかと尋ねたところです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello. I was just asking if I could come to dinner near your house tomorrow if you don't mind.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは。もしよろしければ、明日あなたの家の近くで夕食を食べに来られないかとお願いしたところです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello. If you don't mind, I just asked if I could come to dinner near your house tomorrow.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは。もしよろしければ、明日あなたの家の近くで夕食を食べに来られないか聞いたのです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello. If you don't mind, I asked if I could come to dinner near your house tomorrow.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは。もしよろしければ、明日あなたの家の近くで夕食を食べに来てもいいですかと尋ねました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello. If you don't mind, I asked if I could come to dinner near your house tomorrow.