YOU SAID:
Hello, my name is Alin and I am 17 years old.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私の名前はAlinであり、私は17歳です。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, my name is Alin, I am 17 years old.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私の名前はAlinです、私は17歳です。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, my name is Alin, I am 17 years old.
Come on, you can do better than that.