YOU SAID:
Hello I would love if you become my friend!
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは私は私の友人になった場合を大好きだ!
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi my friend if I would love!
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは私の友人の場合は私は大好き!
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi, my friend I love!
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私の友人私は大好き!
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi, my friend I love!
Come on, you can do better than that.