YOU SAID:
Hello, I am studying in college and would like to apply for your company
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私は大学で勉強しています。あなたの会社に応募したいと思います。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, I am studying at the university. I would like to apply for your company.
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、私は大学で勉強しています。あなたの会社に応募したいのですが。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, I am studying at the university. I would like to apply for your company.
Come on, you can do better than that.