YOU SAID:
Hello how has your day been would you like to come over for a party later this evening
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、今日の夜はパーティーに来てみませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi, Why do not you come to the party tonight?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、今夜パーティーに来ませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, do not come to the party tonight?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、今夜はパーティーに来ませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello, do not come to the party tonight?
Come on, you can do better than that.