YOU SAID:
hello dear, would you like to come over for some tea later this afternoon?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、今日の午後遅くにお茶を飲みに来ませんか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi, why don't you come for tea later this afternoon?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、今日の午後遅くにお茶を飲みに来ませんか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hi, why don't you come for tea later this afternoon?
Come on, you can do better than that.