YOU SAID:
He was staring at me, with the glowing eyes, fright. Long claws, big mouth, I could see it bones.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は目を輝かせて、恐怖で私を見つめていました。 長い爪、大きな口、骨が見えました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He was staring at me with shining eyes and fear. I saw long nails, a big mouth, and bones.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は輝く目と恐れで私を見つめていました。 私は長い爪、大きな口、そして骨を見ました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He was staring at me with shining eyes and fear. I saw long nails, a big mouth, and bones.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.