YOU SAID:
He thought that it might have been okay but the yellow colour of the bread wasn't enough to hold him over until lunch. Bacon was the only thing that she desired, and she would get it even if she had to kill for it.
INTO JAPANESE
彼はそれは大丈夫だったかもしれないと思ったが、パンの黄色は昼食まで彼を引き留めるのに十分ではなかった。彼女が望んでいたのはベーコンだけでした、そして彼女はそれのために殺さなければならないとしてもそれを手に入れました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He thought it might have been okay, but the yellow color of the bread wasn't enough to keep him until lunch. All she wanted was bacon, and she got it even if she had to kill for it.
INTO JAPANESE
彼はそれは大丈夫だったかもしれないと思ったが、パンの黄色は昼食まで彼を保つのに十分ではなかった。彼女が欲しかったのはベーコンだけでした、そして彼女はそれのために殺さなければならなかったとしてもそれを手に入れました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He thought it might have been okay, but the yellow color of the bread wasn't enough to keep him until lunch. All she wanted was bacon, and she got it even if she had to kill for it.
Come on, you can do better than that.