YOU SAID:
He sees the Girl, riding on Poison’s shoulders. They’re both older. Poison looks stronger, healthier than he’s ever seen them.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は少女が毒の肩に乗っているのを見る。どちらも年上です。毒は彼が今まで見たよりも強く、健康に見えます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He sees a girl on her poisoned shoulder. Both are older. The poison looks stronger and healther than he has ever seen.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は彼女の毒された肩に女の子を見ます。どちらも古いです。毒は彼が今まで見たよりも強くて健康に見えます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He sees the girl on her poisoned shoulders. Both are old. The poison looks stronger and healthier than he has ever seen.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は彼女の毒された肩に女の子を見ます。どちらも古いです。毒は彼が今まで見たよりも強くて健康に見えます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He sees the girl on her poisoned shoulders. Both are old. The poison looks stronger and healthier than he has ever seen.
Well done, yes, well done!