YOU SAID:
he kissed me-when he did his lips were cold like the water on a beach late at night.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は私にキスをしました-彼がしたとき、彼の唇は夜遅くにビーチの水のように冷たかったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He kissed me - when he did, his lips were as cold as the water on the beach late at night.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は私にキスをしました - 彼がそうしたとき、彼の唇は夜遅くにビーチの水と同じくらい寒かったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He kissed me-when he did, his lips were as cold as the beach water late at night.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は私にキスをしました-彼がそうしたとき、彼の唇は夜遅くに浜の水と同じくらい冷たかったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He kissed me - when he did, his lips were as cold as the beach water late at night.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は私にキスをしました - 彼がそうしたとき、彼の唇は夜遅くにビーチウォーターと同じくらい寒かったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He kissed me - his lips were as cold as beach water late at night when he did.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は私にキスをしました-彼がしたとき、彼の唇は夜遅くにビーチの水と同じくらい冷たかったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He kissed me-when he did, his lips were as cold as the beach water late at night.
INTO JAPANESE
彼は私にキスをしました-彼がそうしたとき、彼の唇は夜遅くに浜の水と同じくらい冷たかったです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
He kissed me-when he did, his lips were as cold as the beach water late at night.
Come on, you can do better than that.