YOU SAID:
hand in my hand can we promise to never let go?
INTO JAPANESE
hand in my hand 絶対に離さないって約束できる?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
hand in my hand can you promise not to let go?
INTO JAPANESE
hand in my hand 離さないって約束してくれる?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
hand in my hand, will you promise not to let go?
INTO JAPANESE
hand in my hand 離さないって約束してくれる?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
hand in my hand, will you promise not to let go?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.