YOU SAID:
Good evening Mr. Francias, what can I get for you today?
INTO JAPANESE
こんばんはフランシアスさん、今日は何がもらえますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Good evening, Mr. Francias, what can I get today?
INTO JAPANESE
こんばんは、フランシアスさん、今日は何がもらえますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Good evening, Mr. Francias, what can I get today?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.