YOU SAID:
good afternoon young maiden how are you
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは若い乙女さんお元気ですか
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello young lady, how are you?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、お嬢さん、お元気ですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello girl, how are you?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、お嬢さん、調子はどうですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello girl, how are you doing?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、女の子、調子はどうですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello girls, how are you doing?
INTO JAPANESE
こんにちは、女の子たち、調子はどうですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Hello girls, how are you doing?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.