YOU SAID:
Dust from the DEER’s arrival rises still on the eastern horizon.
INTO JAPANESE
鹿の到着からのほこりはまだ東の地平線上に上昇しています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Dust from the arrival of the deer is still rising above the eastern horizon.
INTO JAPANESE
鹿の到着からのほこりはまだ東の地平線の上に上がっています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Dust from the arrival of the deer is still rising above the eastern horizon.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.