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During the whole of a dull, dark, and soundless day in the autumn of the year, when the clouds hung oppressively low in the heavens,

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一年の秋、雲が圧倒的に低く垂れ下がった、鈍く、暗く、無音の日中、

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In the fall of the year, the clouds were overwhelmingly low and drooping, dull, dark, silent during the day,

INTO JAPANESE

今年の秋には、雲は圧倒的に低く、垂れ下がっていて、鈍く、暗く、日中は静かでした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This fall, the clouds were overwhelmingly low, hanging, dull, dark, and quiet during the day.

INTO JAPANESE

この秋、雲は圧倒的に低く、ぶら下がっていて、くすんでいて、暗く、日中は静かでした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This fall, the clouds were overwhelmingly low, hanging, dull, dark, and quiet during the day.