YOU SAID:
Do you want to go to the dance with me?
INTO JAPANESE
私と一緒にダンスに行きませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to go dance with me?
INTO JAPANESE
私と一緒に踊りに行きませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to go dance with me?
Come on, you can do better than that.