YOU SAID:
death is among you, atop a pale horse
INTO JAPANESE
死はあなたの中にあり、淡い馬の上にあります
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Death is in you, on a pale horse
INTO JAPANESE
死はあなたの中にあり、淡い馬に乗っている
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Death is in you, riding a pale horse
INTO JAPANESE
死はあなたの中にあり、青白い馬に乗っています
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Death is in you, riding a pale horse
That didn't even make that much sense in English.