YOU SAID:
Daniel tied his shoe then went home then he played video games then went to the gym and died
INTO JAPANESE
ダニエルは靴紐を結び、家に帰り、ビデオゲームをしてからジムに行き、死亡しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Daniel tied his shoelaces, went home, played video games, then went to the gym and died.
INTO JAPANESE
ダニエルは靴ひもを結び、家に帰り、ビデオゲームをし、その後ジムに行って死亡しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Daniel tied his shoelaces, went home, played video games, then went to the gym and died.
You should move to Japan!