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complaint... strong, robust. OK, alright... to direct, to produce. Sunset is the time of day when our sky meets the outer space solar winds. There are blue, pink, and purple swirls, spinning and twisting, like clouds of balloons caught in a blender. The sun moves slowly to hide behind the line of horizon, while the moon races to take its place in prominence atop the night sky. People slow to a crawl, entranced, fully forgetting the deeds that still must be done. There is a coolness, a calmness, when the sun does set. On July 16, 1969, the Apollo 11 spacecraft launched from the Kennedy Space Center in Florida. Its mission was to go where no human being had gone before—the moon! The crew consisted of Neil Armstrong, Michael Collins, and Buzz Aldrin. The spacecraft landed on the moon in the Sea of Tranquility, a basaltic flood plain, on July 20, 1969. The moonwalk took place the following day. On July 21, 1969, at precisely 10:56 EDT, Commander Neil Armstrong emerged from the Lunar Module and took his famous first step onto the moon’s surface. He declared, “That’s one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.” It was a monumental moment in human history! It was July 21, 1969, and Neil Armstrong awoke with a start. It was the day he would become the first human being to ever walk on the moon. The journey had begun several days earlier, when on July 16th, the Apollo 11 launched from Earth headed into outer space. On board with Neil Armstrong were Michael Collins and Buzz Aldrin. The crew landed on the moon in the Sea of Tranquility a day before the actual walk. Upon Neil’s first step onto the moon’s surface, he declared, “That’s one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.” It sure was! Here is the perfect system for cleaning your room. First, move all of the items that do not have a proper place to the center of the room. Get rid of at least five things that you have not used within the last year. Take out all of the trash, and place all of the dirty dishes in the kitchen sink. Now find a location for each of the items you had placed in the center of the room. For any remaining items, see if you can squeeze them in under your bed or stuff them into the back of your closet. See, that was easy! Oceans and lakes have much in common, but they are also quite different. Both are bodies of water, but oceans are very large bodies of salt water, while lakes are much smaller bodies of fresh water. Lakes are usually surrounded by land, while oceans are what surround continents. Both have plants and animals living in them. The ocean is home to the largest animals on the planet, whereas lakes support much smaller forms of life. When it is time for a vacation, both will make a great place to visit and enjoy. This began as one paragraph, but needed two—one for the problem and one for the solution. Also, notice that the second paragraph is a process paragraph. It would be very easy to add an introduction and conclusion to these two paragraphs and have a complete essay! People often install a kitty door, only to discover that they have a problem. The problem is their cat will not use the kitty door. There are several common reasons why cats won’t use kitty doors. First, they may not understand how a kitty door works. They may not understand that it is a little doorway just for them. Second, many kitty doors are dark and cats cannot see to the other side. As such, they can’t be sure of what is on the other side of the door, so they won’t take the risk. One last reason cats won’t use kitty doors is because some cats don’t like the feeling of pushing through and then having the door drag across their back. But don’t worry—there are solutions to this problem. The first step in solving the problem is to prop the door open with tape. This means your cat will now be able to see through to the other side; your cat will likely begin using the kitty door immediately. Once your cat has gotten used to using the kitty door, remove the tape. Sometimes cats will continue to use the kitty door without any more prompting. If this does not happen, you will want to use food to bribe your cat. When it’s feeding time, sit on the opposite side of the door from your cat and either click the top of the can or crinkle the cat food bag. Open the door to show your cat that it is both you and the food waiting on the other side of the door. Repeat this a couple times, and then feed your cat. After a couple days of this, your kitty door problem will be gone.
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苦情...強い、堅牢。 [OK]を夕焼けは、私たちの空が宇宙の太陽風に会う一日の時間です。青、ピンク、紫の渦巻き、紡績とねじれ、ブレンダーに巻き込まれた風船の雲があります。太陽は地平線の背後に隠れるようにゆっくりと動いています。
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Complain ... strong, robust. [OK] The sunset is the time of our day when our sky meets the solar wind of the universe. Blue, pink, purple swirls, spinning and twisting, balloon clouds caught in a blender. The sun moves slowly to hide behind the horizon.
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不平...強くて丈夫。 [OK]夕焼けは私たちの空が宇宙の太陽風と出会う私たちの日の時間です。青、ピンク、紫の渦巻き、回転、ねじれ、風船の雲がブレンダーに巻き込まれました。太陽は地平線の後ろに隠れるようにゆっくり動いています。
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Gratitude ... strong and durable. [OK] The sunset is the time of our day when our sky meets the solar wind of the universe. Blue, pink, purple spirals, rotation, twist, balloon clouds caught in the blender. The sun moves slowly to hide behind the horizon.
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感謝の気持ち…強くて丈夫。 [OK]夕焼けは私たちの空が宇宙の太陽風と出会う私たちの日の時間です。青、ピンク、紫のらせん、回転、ねじれ、風船の雲がミキサーに巻き込まれました。太陽は地平線の後ろに隠れるようにゆっくり動いています。
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Gratitude feeling ... strong and durable. [OK] The sunset is the time of our day when our sky meets the solar wind of the universe. Blue, pink, purple helix, rotation, twist, balloon clouds caught in the mixer. The sun moves slowly to hide behind the horizon.
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感謝の気持ち…強くて丈夫。 [OK]夕焼けは私たちの空が宇宙の太陽風と出会う私たちの日の時間です。青、ピンク、紫のらせん、回転、ねじれ、気球の雲がミキサーに巻き込まれました。太陽は地平線の後ろに隠れるようにゆっくり動いています。
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Gratitude feeling ... strong and durable. [OK] The sunset is the time of our day when our sky meets the solar wind of the universe. Blue, pink, purple helix, rotation, twist, balloon clouds caught in the mixer. The sun moves slowly to hide behind the horizon.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.