YOU SAID:
come away with me in the night, come away with me and I will write you a song
INTO JAPANESE
来るまで私の夜、私と離れて来るし、私は歌を書く
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Come away with me until my evening, and I write the songs
INTO JAPANESE
私の夜、私は曲を書くまで私と離れて来る
Come on, you can do better than that.