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Chapter Three “Minrie!” Lily screamed, rushing to catch her as she collapsed, eyes still opened, “What's wrong with her?” Minrie was unconscious and whimpering unaudioable things, she looked as if she was in a lot of pain. Ember hurriedly crouched
INTO JAPANESE
第三章「ミンリー!」リリーは悲鳴を上げ、倒れた彼女を捕まえようと急いだ。ミンリーは意識を失い、聞き取れないことを泣き言を言っていました。彼女はとても苦しんでいるように見えました。 Emberは急いでしゃがんだ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Chapter 3 "Minly!" Lily screamed and rushed to catch her as she fell. Minley was unconscious and whining inaudibly. She looked very distressed. Ember quickly crouched down
INTO JAPANESE
第3章「ミンリー!」リリーは悲鳴を上げ、倒れた彼女を捕まえようと急いだ。ミンリーは意識を失い、聞こえないほど泣き言を言っていました。彼女はとても苦しんでいるように見えました。 Emberはすぐにしゃがみました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Chapter 3 "Minly!" Lily screamed and rushed to catch her as she fell. Minley was unconscious and whining inaudibly. She looked very distressed. Ember quickly crouched down
That didn't even make that much sense in English.