YOU SAID:
Can I please come over to your house and eat popcorn in your living room with you?
INTO JAPANESE
あなたの家に来て、居間で一緒にポップコーンを食べてもいいですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Can I come over to your house and eat popcorn with you in the living room?
INTO JAPANESE
あなたの家に来て、居間で一緒にポップコーンを食べてもいいですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Can I come over to your house and eat popcorn with you in the living room?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.