YOU SAID:
Can I have some money please?
INTO JAPANESE
お金をいただけますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Can I have some money?
INTO JAPANESE
お金を少しくれますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Can you give me some money
INTO JAPANESE
お金をくれませんか
BACK INTO ENGLISH
can you give me some money
INTO JAPANESE
お金をくれませんか
BACK INTO ENGLISH
can you give me some money
That didn't even make that much sense in English.