YOU SAID:
By the time the severity of the list had settled into my gut in a ball of dread, the evening red of the west had doused my world in shadow -- it would soon be nightfall.
INTO JAPANESE
リストの厳しさが恐怖のボールで私の腸に落ち着いた頃には、西の夕方の赤は私の世界を影で使っていました- それはすぐに夜になるでしょう。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
By the time the rigor of the list settled in my gut with a ball of fear, the red of the west evening was using my world in the shadows - it would soon be night.
INTO JAPANESE
リストの厳しさが恐怖のボールで私の腸に落ち着く頃には、西の夕方の赤は影で私の世界を使っていました - それはすぐに夜になるでしょう。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
By the time the rigor of the list settled in my gut with a ball of fear, the red of the west evening was using my world in the shadows - it would soon be night.
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