YOU SAID:
But there are some who would enslave the world by reviving the dread destructive force known as magic.
INTO JAPANESE
しかし、いくつかのマジックとして知られている恐怖の破壊的な力の復活によって世界を隷属させるだろう人。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
However, would enslave the world by the revival of the destructive forces of terror known as the magic of some people.
Well done, yes, well done!