YOU SAID:

But the stars came out and they danced about ere again I ventured near

INTO JAPANESE

でも星が出てきて、また私が近くに行ったところで踊っていました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

But the stars came out and they were dancing where I was near again

INTO JAPANESE

でも星が出てきて、また私の近くで踊っていた

BACK INTO ENGLISH

But the stars came out and they were dancing near me again

INTO JAPANESE

でも星が出てきて、また私の近くで踊っていた

BACK INTO ENGLISH

But the stars came out and they were dancing near me again