YOU SAID:

But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud

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でも彼は自分が書き留めたことを忘れ続け、群衆全体が大騒ぎになりました

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But he kept forgetting what he had written down and the whole crowd went wild

INTO JAPANESE

しかし、彼は自分が書き留めたことを忘れ続け、群衆全体が熱狂しました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

But he kept forgetting what he had written down and the whole crowd went wild